ext_79605 ([identity profile] desfinado.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] harborshore 2010-03-01 05:04 pm (UTC)

So, so lovely! The ending is the best part, rather than ending after orgasms; it's sweet and succinct but carries the complexity of their relationship, of what they'll go through together and how much amazing stuff they'll achieve!

"Come here, fuck, Brian, get up here," Bob manages, running his fingers across Brian's face

I love this especially, like I can feel the surprise and need in Bob's words, mmmm. Thanks again for letting me see it early, you are such an amazing writer! :D

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