OH MY GOD, VEE. yessssssssss. Like. I figure'd we'd work on this later, after this verse was done, but I'm so madly in love with this, because it just sort of--I feel like it sort of encapsulates so many themes we're working with, of being scared and not knowing what's coming and pushing through it anyway, and ugh, seriously, I am so freaking in love with this. And this line:
Annie thinks about how eventually they won't need to be so careful with each other; she thinks about stage lights and standing up straight and music; she thinks about not being afraid.
Like, yeah dude. Yeah. So much yeah. That's just perfect, right there. And I love Annie's mom, and the bits you threw in that help ME to see more of the 'verse the way you see it, and now I have new canon to jump off of for my cowriter-ly duties. And I love imagining Laena and Annie as teenagers, still beautiful but not quite yet so polished, with hair in their faces and bitten nails and scuffed shoes.
Basically I just love this forever and this VERSE and oh man I am so excited about it again. You are awesome. I am so freaking spoiled, oh my god ♥
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OH MY GOD, VEE. yessssssssss. Like. I figure'd we'd work on this later, after this verse was done, but I'm so madly in love with this, because it just sort of--I feel like it sort of encapsulates so many themes we're working with, of being scared and not knowing what's coming and pushing through it anyway, and ugh, seriously, I am so freaking in love with this. And this line:
Annie thinks about how eventually they won't need to be so careful with each other; she thinks about stage lights and standing up straight and music; she thinks about not being afraid.
Like, yeah dude. Yeah. So much yeah. That's just perfect, right there. And I love Annie's mom, and the bits you threw in that help ME to see more of the 'verse the way you see it, and now I have new canon to jump off of for my cowriter-ly duties. And I love imagining Laena and Annie as teenagers, still beautiful but not quite yet so polished, with hair in their faces and bitten nails and scuffed shoes.
Basically I just love this forever and this VERSE and oh man I am so excited about it again. You are awesome. I am so freaking spoiled, oh my god ♥