Ahhhhhhhhhh this was my FAVOURITE THING I've seen from you in AGES when it was that little commentfic and I am so thrilled you fleshed it out! It's better than I could have imagined, so beautiful and full of confidence and beauty and competence. Lindsey in drag is someone you make us fall in love with VERY QUICKLY.
Her voice is affectionate, and shit, Lindsey just likes her. She turns her face into Spencer's shoulder because she needs to hide for a second before whatever-it-is that she's feeling becomes too obvious.
I LOVE, more than anything in this fic, how you capture Lindsey's feelings for Spencer. All these beautifully-written lines do an amazing job of depicting those first-night emotions for someone that you KNOW is more special than usual.
Spencer’s laughing as she kisses Lindsey awake, apologizing for her morning breath, and Lindsey thinks, oh, you, this, and is afraid to go much further in her head than that.
SO BEAUTIFUL. I can't even. And the very last line of the story, oh MANNNN oh man. It's silly and happy and just one moment but full of poential and this big, excited feeling and it's just Lindsey BURSTING. :DDD
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"Don't do that," she says, "I can't concentrate when you, shit, when you're doing that."
"That's the point," Spencer says, a smile in her voice.
Such lovely, in-character dialogue! And it shows their interest, their intention and how turned on they are. Not to mention how sexy it was with Lindsey's wet face and how the tie rubs her skin (UNF) and feels good, and two fingers holding Spencer open, nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnrgh!
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Date: 2010-10-03 06:58 am (UTC)Her voice is affectionate, and shit, Lindsey just likes her. She turns her face into Spencer's shoulder because she needs to hide for a second before whatever-it-is that she's feeling becomes too obvious.
I LOVE, more than anything in this fic, how you capture Lindsey's feelings for Spencer. All these beautifully-written lines do an amazing job of depicting those first-night emotions for someone that you KNOW is more special than usual.
Spencer’s laughing as she kisses Lindsey awake, apologizing for her morning breath, and Lindsey thinks, oh, you, this, and is afraid to go much further in her head than that.
SO BEAUTIFUL. I can't even. And the very last line of the story, oh MANNNN oh man. It's silly and happy and just one moment but full of poential and this big, excited feeling and it's just Lindsey BURSTING. :DDD
ALSO:
"Don't do that," she says, "I can't concentrate when you, shit, when you're doing that."
"That's the point," Spencer says, a smile in her voice.
Such lovely, in-character dialogue! And it shows their interest, their intention and how turned on they are. Not to mention how sexy it was with Lindsey's wet face and how the tie rubs her skin (UNF) and feels good, and two fingers holding Spencer open, nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnrgh!