Oh my God. The way you write. I just - the images you painted (especially of Brian, but, uh, I have a bit of a kink about guys being made sex-stupid by girls...wait, did that come out right? Um. *bites lip* That was a compliment, okay? Because it's ringing a bit kinky-in-the-bad-way in my head, but I can't quite figure out how, so I sincerely apologise for it and will happily rephrase it when I get my own brain working...oh my God, Laura, shut up >.<), and the way they were such teenagers - (condoms are so dumb) indeed.
I love that you came back to them, they're kind of slightly my favourites, and that we found out more about them (Bob and Lindsey ♥___♥), and the things they've done (fireworks on the roof, hee! Which has really put me in the mood for the fireworks tomorrow night... :D). I especially love how you handled Bob throughout the whole thing, mainly when she was freaking out and when she thought it wasn't going to happen, and how Brian was okay with that, and then it did and that was awesome, but not again and that was okay too.
I just - I just love the way you write, the way you handle things and don't make them seem forced - sex and "issues", be they related to the sex or not, both. Never ever stop. ♥♥♥
Also, *hugs* I hope your cold is better, and that you're no longer living out a suitcase.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
(no subject)
Date: 2010-11-04 07:14 pm (UTC)I love that you came back to them, they're kind of slightly my favourites, and that we found out more about them (Bob and Lindsey ♥___♥), and the things they've done (fireworks on the roof, hee! Which has really put me in the mood for the fireworks tomorrow night... :D). I especially love how you handled Bob throughout the whole thing, mainly when she was freaking out and when she thought it wasn't going to happen, and how Brian was okay with that, and then it did and that was awesome, but not again and that was okay too.
I just - I just love the way you write, the way you handle things and don't make them seem forced - sex and "issues", be they related to the sex or not, both. Never ever stop. ♥♥♥
Also, *hugs* I hope your cold is better, and that you're no longer living out a suitcase.