I really liked this; it had a lot of power. I always know someone can write well when they get me all caught up in action scenes instead of bored by them. I read this a few days ago and I still have a lot of scenes very clear in my mind. You portrayed the way Lindsey uses her artistic talent to express her vehemence very well and that combination of passion with visual imagery pervades the whole fic.
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Date: 2009-06-29 12:06 pm (UTC)