For real, when I realized this story was going to be longer than the last cuddling scene, I opened Welcome to Planet Motherfucker and read the first band scene. The way you write them works so amazingly well, I'm beaming a little stupidly right now that you think their group dynamic works. *beams at you*
And it was kind of the thing I wanted to get right, too, the way they are as a band--the banter was obviously crucial, but I really wanted to demonstrate how they weren't locked into stereotypes (it'd be so easy to make Kitty the band mom all the time, for example). Anyway, enough rambling, I'm so glad you liked it!
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Date: 2009-09-08 09:21 pm (UTC)And it was kind of the thing I wanted to get right, too, the way they are as a band--the banter was obviously crucial, but I really wanted to demonstrate how they weren't locked into stereotypes (it'd be so easy to make Kitty the band mom all the time, for example). Anyway, enough rambling, I'm so glad you liked it!