Right? Right. She said it more eloquently than my paraphrasing conveys (she happens to be quite a good poet) but seriously. They were all so--I can't come up with a better adjective than naive, and it's not strong enough.
You're most welcome! I've noticed you thinking about it in little asides in your journal, writing entries or no. It's something I'm concerned with a lot--that's not saying I don't fail at it too, but I'm trying. Changing blond hair into braided dark hair, that sort of thing.
When I do write my longer and hopefully more articulate post, I'm going to talk more about the virtue of Random. ETA: because sometimes minor characters make a lot of difference too, in creating a world that is peopled by many voices. Defying expectations.
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Date: 2010-05-28 01:13 am (UTC)You're most welcome! I've noticed you thinking about it in little asides in your journal, writing entries or no. It's something I'm concerned with a lot--that's not saying I don't fail at it too, but I'm trying. Changing blond hair into braided dark hair, that sort of thing.
When I do write my longer and hopefully more articulate post, I'm going to talk more about the virtue of Random. ETA: because sometimes minor characters make a lot of difference too, in creating a world that is peopled by many voices. Defying expectations.